I like this mock-up because it has a child-like appeal with the hand drawn textures that both adults and children can relate to. I have made the donate a prominent feature of the page by using contrasting colours. I would also animate the stars surrounding the hot air balloon to grab peoples attention. Also I have added a subtle graphic of children skipping together to let the audience know what Wish upon a star is about. I have also made the navigation easy to follow by including a painted mark behind the navigational text when you click on each page. This will let the audience know where they are on the website.